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{"there's no blame for how our love did slowly fade
and now that it's gone it's like it wasn't there at all
and here I rest where disappointment and regret collide"
--death cab for cutie

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:iconundeadliterature:
This is extremely good!

I love the separation between the paragraphs.

The imagery is so amazing, and well done. I feel like I am seeing it happen before my eyes.
:iconcorina90:
Aw, thank you so much! <3
:iconundeadliterature:
You're super welcome.
I loved it :)
:iconcorina90:
I really appreciate that. I wasn't sure how I felt about this piece. I almost didn't upload it, but reading it again this morning, it's growing on me.
:iconundeadliterature:
Well, I hope you keep it up.
It really is a beautiful piece.
:iconarimalice:
Wow. Very good job.
:iconcorina90:
Thank you so much! :hug:
:iconyuniku:
This is wonderful, the imagery is so vivid! I love it! :heart:

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:iconcorina90:
Thank you so much! I really appreciate that! :hug:
:iconmarycecchi:
If you ever publish a book, i will be the first one to buy a copy. You write amazingly well, it is incredible! I forgot to breathe while i was reading this!

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