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burning puppets. by =Corina90:iconCorina90:

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{"this car turned over without a key or gasoline tonight
fill everything on fire and just to killed to the fall to dress tonight
help me to wait on you, hesitate on through, cause I'm alone
feel so jaded, contemplative, waiting for you"
--anberlin

I really shouldn't post when I'm mincing words like this.

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:iconlady-afrit:
~Lady-Afrit Jun 28, 2009, 4:45:38 PM
Lots of pain in this one. Bitter sweet, I like it alot.

If you're feeling cruddy I hope you feel better.

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clubs I'm in: [link] ~Kitsune-Haven

Let me say a prayer over our souls as the world slowly dies. We poison ourselves a bit more every day....what a mess.....
:iconfridaythe13islucky:
~Fridaythe13isLucky Jun 28, 2009, 4:48:24 PM
Really good one. I like the way you wrote the ideas down in the order they came. Nice.

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95% of all teen girls would go into a panic if the Jonas Brothers were on a 247 foot building about to jump to kill themselves. Copy and paste this if you are one of the 5% who brought popcorn,a chair, and shouted DO A FLIP !
:iconcorina90:
=Corina90 Jun 28, 2009, 4:51:37 PM
Aw, thank you. Jumbled ideas, I'm surprised they make sense to anyone but me.
:iconcorina90:
=Corina90 Jun 28, 2009, 4:52:36 PM
I'm actually feeling pretty good. I'm not sure which area of the brain this one originated out of. Thank you for the feedback though :cuddle:
:iconlady-afrit:
~Lady-Afrit Jun 28, 2009, 4:58:39 PM
Funny how we poets can feel perfectly fine and still write out somthing that makes it seem like the world is ending. ^-^

You're very welcome.

--
clubs I'm in: [link] ~Kitsune-Haven

Let me say a prayer over our souls as the world slowly dies. We poison ourselves a bit more every day....what a mess.....
:iconcorina90:
=Corina90 Jun 28, 2009, 4:59:48 PM
It is! And unless you yourself are a writer, it's almost impossible to understand.
:iconfridaythe13islucky:
~Fridaythe13isLucky Jun 28, 2009, 5:00:19 PM
Well, i don't know about anybody else, but at least to me they make sense, and i like them a lot.
Damn, how i wish my writing were half as good as yours.

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95% of all teen girls would go into a panic if the Jonas Brothers were on a 247 foot building about to jump to kill themselves. Copy and paste this if you are one of the 5% who brought popcorn,a chair, and shouted DO A FLIP !
:iconlady-afrit:
~Lady-Afrit Jun 28, 2009, 5:01:34 PM
*laughs* ,and people ask you if you're ok even if they know you in real life. XD

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clubs I'm in: [link] ~Kitsune-Haven

Let me say a prayer over our souls as the world slowly dies. We poison ourselves a bit more every day....what a mess.....
:iconcorina90:
=Corina90 Jun 28, 2009, 5:05:13 PM
Exactly! I'm constantly reminding people it's fiction.
:iconcorina90:
=Corina90 Jun 28, 2009, 5:05:43 PM
Thank you so much :blush: And I bet it's better than mine.
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