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caroline dreams in technicolor by =Corina90:iconCorina90:


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{"because on and off
the clouds have fought for control over the sky
and lately the weather has been so bipolar
and consequently so have I
and now I'm sunny with a high of seventy five
since you took my heavy heart
and made it light"
--relient k

full title: caroline dreams in technicolor, but wishes in black and white.

she's been in my thoughts. so i decided to put her into words.

Critiques


:iconshamziel:
Beautiful.

There are things we wish to have and to do with our lives, and when we are unable to live out those wishes we often feel guilty or ashamed. This is the story of someone who doesn't feel that shame, and is happy to dream and live in two different worlds.

At the same time, this is a vivid portrait of an individual person. She is more real than just her thoughts and impressions, and through these words I can see her from without and within at the same time.

I cannot express how happy it makes me to read this. It's rare that a smile lingers after I read something, and I am grateful that these words have been able to convey that feeling.
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:icondanceswithwind:
This is beautiful. It feels so effortless and paints such a pretty picture. Glad to have stumbled upon it. =] :+fav:

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"Your life is defined by its opportunities...even the ones you miss..." -The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
:iconcorina90:
:heart: Aw, thank you so much!
:iconchloroformboy:
omg, the imagery, the diction, it's all quite lovely !
one of my faves from you :heart:

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i make them good girls go bad !
:iconcorina90:
:heart:!! Aw, thank you sososo much. Honestly.
:iconchloroformboy:
<3 of course
you're brilliantt

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i make them good girls go bad !
:iconshewolf21:
This is so beautiful! HEY! You don't know me well enough to be writing about me! jking! I :heart: this!

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These endless days are finally ending in a blaze and I am caught in the fire the point of no return Iwill walk through the fire And let it Burn

So u wanna be my friend...hmm...we could be friends, but if u get distracted.. i'll kiss u.. cuz i like u!
:iconyourheartonmysleeve:
Aha, yet again, I can only bow and say that I love Caroline. The way you write her to be is beautiful, full of ideals and colour. :)
:iconcorina90:
:blush: Thank you soso much. Seriously, you're going to start making me blush.
:iconcorina90:
:D Haha, that made me smile. Thank you so much.
:iconcorina90:
I am sososo not brilliant, sir.

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