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‘cause you can’t feel this anymore it’s getting bluer and you can’t keep faking that you can’t feel this anymore" --death cab for cutie full title: dreamers never die, they just wake up. Comments My heart hurts.
It take something really emotionally powerful to do that. (8D) Really, really amazing. --  I’m sorry, I am. I’m wrong, I know. I’d love you if I had a heart, I’d love you if I knew how, I’d love you if I could bottle the wind, I’d love you if I could find my feet.
I was so excited to see a new diviation in my inbox by you. I was not dissapointed.  -- --------------- love is the prescription written for loneliness !! You are too nice to me. Thank you soso much.  I didn't meant to make your heart hurt. But thank you. Soso much. It's nothing, just a reaction to something awesome. You're very welcome. (:
--  wow! that was amazing. i have never seen anyone write the way you do, that was increadable. so simple, yet so very complex. it really makes you think.
-- death. such a beautiful thing. its not something to be feared. its something to look forward to.  Aw, I cannot tell you how much that meant to me. Thank you so much. Wow, finally, the girl is the bad guy. I like that, it's a different perspective. Yet, she still seems to get hurt.
-- Avatar made by *Veemonsito  wow that was great
 i loved it-- Ushishi... haha you got re-ject-ed. The girl has a lot of potential to be very, very bad. But hurt almost always runs two ways to some degree. |
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Critiques
Normally I do not enjoy reading prose, but this piece has a really charm to it. As I reached the middle and the conclusion of this piece I also found it extremely relatable, and that is a definite side that your piece was able to resonate with your audience.
My favorite line of this piece is, "I pave my road with bad intentions, you get your feet struck in the wet concrete". Not only does it lend itself to rhyme, but it creates a very powerful bit of imagery. This is a piece I definitely enjoyed reading and a piece I am proud to have in my favorites.
I love how the flow is. It's like the tide. Ebb and flow is apparent.
I also love how the little quips at the end of a paragraph sum up all the emotions and feelings of the first part of a paragraph.
But I really loved the way you used the name of the poem to almost sum up the words you were conveying.
"Dreamers never die, they just wake up." and how the end of the "relationship" was "the dream finally killed the dreamer. the nightmare finally got ahold."
You use such creative flow and words that never cease to hit me in the heart. Wonderful. As always.
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