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i can fight gravity. by =Corina90:iconCorina90:

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{"hunger hurts and i want him so bad, oh it kills
'cause i know i'm a mess he don't wanna clean up
i got to fold 'cause these hands are too shaky to hold
hunger hurts, but starving works, when it costs too much to love"
--fiona apple

full title: i can fight gravity but that doesn't mean i won't crash

this might be in scraps in the morning.
i needed to write it but i don't think i found the words i wanted.

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~TheBlueRoanFilly Oct 14, 2009, 5:05:45 PM
beautiful.. :]
i love it, you never fail to amaze me, i swear i always look forward to what you'll post next.. you are outstanding, i cant even believe it... how well you capture feelings... :hug:

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♥.::Andrea+Donnie::. "I'll be there until your heart stops beating." ~ Jacob Black ♥ :boing:
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*Woman-7 Oct 14, 2009, 5:07:13 PM
its perfect

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"Live life to the fullest TODAY, because tomorrow may never come."
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=Corina90 Oct 14, 2009, 5:07:17 PM
that means a lot to me :] thank you
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=Corina90 Oct 14, 2009, 5:08:25 PM
you think? it feels like something's missing.
i just can't decide what.
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*Woman-7 Oct 14, 2009, 5:08:41 PM
no i really liked it :)

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"Live life to the fullest TODAY, because tomorrow may never come."
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~Elegant-Esthetics Oct 14, 2009, 5:11:15 PM
I don't know so much that it should be about finding the words you wanted, but moreso about how honest the piece is. On that note, it's absolutely wonderful, just like the rest of your work.
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*Solaces Oct 14, 2009, 5:13:21 PM
lovely! I especially enjoyed:

"
i’m tearing apart dictionaries because none of them have the definition that describes this. i’m throwing the radio through the window because none of the music feels right. my teeth are on edge and i’m on a wire. i’m hanging three hundred feet over a giant ‘x’ that’ll bruise like hell when i swan dive towards it."


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:iconcorina90:
=Corina90 Oct 14, 2009, 5:13:45 PM
thank you :]
maybe i'll smooth it out in the morning.
or just leave it rough as is. maybe i prefer it that way.
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=Corina90 Oct 14, 2009, 5:14:00 PM
thank you, darling :heart:
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~Giraffasauri Oct 14, 2009, 5:14:05 PM
DO. NOT. SCRAP. THIS. PLEASE.

it is completely beautiful.

this part, especially. :

"so i’m driving through the night without my headlights on. if i tear off the rearview mirror, then i can close my eyes and pretend that i am alone. but i can feel it breathing down my neck, i can feel it right behind me. i’m denying with bated breath but i’m fighting a losing battle and my lungs have already deflated."


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♥ Blackbird singing in the dead of night, take these broken wings and learn to fly ♥
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