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{"and I'll do anything you ever
dreamed to be complete little pieces of the nothing that fall may put your arms around me what you feel is what you are and what you are is beautiful " --goo goo dolls full title: i never liked life until i lived it with you whatever you say, don't say it's cliched. i might be feeling a little cliched at the moment. and some cliches are there for a reason. Comments
"and when i sat on your lap, counted the kisses, multiplied the desire, divided the distance and subtracted the inhibitions, i decided i might be mathematically inclined after all. "
^^^ so freaking beautiful! you never let me down your poetry is amazing. And this one is definately not an exception -- I'm a fifteen year old that's short enough to pass for an eight year old, draws like a three year old and gives advice to people twice my age.....welcome to irony, hoes. |
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Critiques
"Being swept off of my feet" is a common phrase, but it is woven into a clever sentence. "Being kissed boneless" is a marvelous phrase that I had never heard before and it left me stunned in the end.
All in all, I enjoyed reading this very much.
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