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if good things cause pain. by =Corina90:iconCorina90:


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{"please make the technology
so i can turn up your love like some cold machine
don't feed me scraps from your bed
i won't be the stray coming back just to be fed"
--brand new

full title: if good things cause pain, you must be a saint.

i write nonsense in the morning.

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:iconforeverrrchocolate:
Wow, so much negative... it's so sad she staid with it for so long... perhaps she thought she could revive him, but it was too late. I'm glad she moved on.

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:iconi-tsu:
that was beautiful :heart:
:iconcorina90:
:heart: thank you so much!
:iconcorina90:
i'm glad she did too :heart:
:iconravenofroses:
mmm.

that was lovely.

i like the way you wrote this. the lack of capitalization makes it feel quieter, and your word choices were plain, but deliberate. it fits quite well with the traits you wrote into the narrator. ^__^

wonderful job.

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Now be a good little girl and drink your medicine...

Ave Atque Vale

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:iconcorina90:
thank you soso much :heart: i really appreciate it
:iconartiskewl:
The person sounds freezing.

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:iconfirefairy102:
Beautiful :heart:

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Dude........(?) :D

*falls over from own awesomeness*

Light....it's magic
:iconmodestlyvainglorious:
Nonsense you may write, but it is
Beautiful, wonderful, amazing,
Glorious nonsense. =)

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One does not write poetry, nor does poetry ask to be written. It demands it. It grabs you by the throat, forces your hand and screams, "write me or I'll tear you apart from the inside out."

*Modestly*Vainglorious*
:iconcaimito:
i LOVE the last two lines.

If I weren't at work right now, I'd probably be in tears. But the good kind of tears, not the sad kind. Beautifully done, again.

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I want to feel things, really feel things. How's that for an ambition?
- Revolutionary Road

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