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instead of breathing. by =Corina90:iconCorina90:


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{"i should be sleeping instead of keeping these late hours i've been keeping
i've been pacing and retracing every step of every move
and even though i'm feeling so right, i'm so happy, still i know
i should be sleeping instead of dreamin' about you"
--emerson drive

full title: instead of breathing, i'm drowning in you

excuse my it's-too-late-at-night-and-i'm-rambling :]

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:iconlunanoctis:
With all the emotion put into this, I can tell that you really love this person ^^ It's very touching.

--
“Two Hidden Leaf ninjas, Naruto and Sasuke, get a special mission from their leader: Attend to Hogwarts and murder the boy named Harry Potter? Only Inuyasha and Kagome's love can save Harry now!"

Originality is futile.
:iconbreakdownandfall:
amazed beyond amazement
:heart:
excuse my loss-of-anything-else-to-say
:iconrennskye:
"i trust, without a singular doubt, that if i jump with eyes closed, you will make sure i don't rip my jeans on the pavement" I love how you never mention being caught, but there's no doubt that he'll never let you fall. This feels like every unwritten rule, and hugs exactly when you need the most. Like when it's okay to cry, and you know it, and somehow you're laughing at the same time.

Last line is love.

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~LABB-Club, *MattGasm, ~We-Love-Gaara-club *GLBT-Pride-Club, ~HetaliaFamily
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"I'm also excellent in bed and disturbingly intelligent." - Dlvvanzor, Creature
:iconhappymegs81:
This is really amazing! Wonderfully written, I love your poetry! It makes me really happy.
Excellent work!

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{My Snowman Melted! Poetry Contest-- [link]
{The Contest You Have Been Dying To Enter-- [link]
{Your Own Winter Wonderland Contest-- [link]
:iconpiano-girl234:
There you go again.
Pulling at my heartstrings~

'lists of a hundred and two different ways to breathe that still leave me breathless whenever you're around. '

This line left ME breathless
You leave me breathless

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Put this in your signature if you or someone you know is fighting, has survived, or has died in a Pokemon battle.
:iconladyfirephoenix:
having read the last few of your amazing works, it appears you've either taken your heart out of your pocket, or are just dreaming of doing it. they have all been sweet happy-in-love poems instead of darker (but equally as brilliant) ones.

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"Where the fuck have the bunnies gone?" -Midday demon
:iconkatalyhnah:
I cried. Love this. <3

Please, PLEASE, don't ever stop writing. You have a great talent, my dear.
:iconrakusyuri:
This one is beautiful, absolutely amazing!
You're slowly becoming my favorite artist on DA.
You are simply the best, out of all the rest... :aww:
:iconchoirsoftheheavens:
instead of breathing, I'd rather read this over again. you're making me breathless.

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I really should be studying.

active in:
*DailyLitDeviations ~alphabetspawn *Critique-It
:iconstarcraftor:
Do you really know Gaelic? That would be pretty damn impressive, at least in my opinion....

But yeah. Absolutely wonderful. =)

--
"Comfort the disturbed; disturb the comfortable."
"Courage is being scared to hell, but saddling up anyways."
"It is not the answer that enlightens, but the question."


Thanks to Tala Hassounah for my avatar pic.

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