Report a Policy Violation
When did it suddenly become cool to hate everything? It's a growing problem, especially in the entertainment world, and no one benefits from an increasingly hard to please, pessimistic audience.
Author's Comments
{this is what you get, this is who I am
take me now or leave me any way you can sometimes I trip and fall, but I know where I stand and if you're thinking about changing my direction don't mess with imperfection" --saving jane full title: love fell upside down, but don't worry, it still doesn't make sense. Comments i love the 'don't breathe then'
the whole thing is great!  I was smiling through the whole thing, and started breathing only after reading the last line
 -- Avatar made by *Veemonsito  oh, i LOVE your titels <3
-- i make them good girls go bad !  thank you soso much!  thank you so much, love. You're welcome!
-- Avatar made by *Veemonsito  why did i feel like i was falling
in love throughout the entire piece? did you have any idea your words could do that? wow. i couldn't agree more. (it is the places where the polish is rubbed off.)  -- (there's no testimony without the test, and what we do with our own is our own damn business...)  "You don’t love the polish, you love the places where’s it rubbed off to leave him raw and open and human. "
That's so ingenious and perfect for this one, <3 Loveitloveitloveit.  -- The movie "Titanic" is living and undying proof that artists make better lovers than most other people.  i love you
(in a non-creepy way) i'm going to read your other other updates now and probably say the same thing, just to warn you. just REALLY needing awesomeness right now in life, and you certainly provided it. -- "without imagination, there can be no dreams. without dreams, there can be no reality. therefore, the world is nothing without imagination." |
|
Community News372 When did we start hating everything?`Rahll
 reports, 1d 16h agoWhen did it suddenly become cool to hate everything? It's a growing problem, especially in the entertainment world, and no one benefits from an increasingly hard to please, pessimistic audience. 277 Seniority Announcement - December 2009$chix0r
 reports, 1d 20h agoThe final round of Senior announcements for 2009! 92 Diversity Feature*nothingbuteverything
 reports, 1d 7h agoArt is so diverse, but we can appreciate it all! Showing the diverse talents of my watchers to the world! 53 wishing you happy holidays...*enemy-89
 reports, 19h 50m agoa wonderful collection-photography,digital and traditional works from my friends,from watchers and from people randomly found on dA.enjoy! 49 Daily Literature Deviations - December 24, 2009=DailyLitDeviations
 reports, 1d 6h agoDaily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it. Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article. In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you  the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community. |
PollWhat is your favorite holiday tradition? |
deviantART Loves You
Deviously serving the art and skin community for 3,427 days.
Only 225 days until our tenth birthday!
|
Deviousness
^Ikue has been a devious member of our community for almost 7 years and in this time he has proven to be nothing short of dedicated and devoted. Whilst volunteering his time over the last 22 months as a Gallery Moderator within the Community Relations Team, Chris has brought the Vector gallery and many vector artists directly into the spotlight. ^Ikue's commitment to the community is evident in everything he touches and you can always find him reaching out to others with an encouraging word. Chris is a natural leader with a vibrant and empathic personality, and is a role model for deviants everywhere. It's ev... Read More
|
Follow us on Twitter
Become a fan on Facebook
Critiques
Things like how you point out how flawed he is makes it interesting (but one of the sayings is "you like people for their perfection, you love them for their flaws...")
But the way you ended it was so perfect. It was like an older woman telling a young girl not to fall in love and then giving up realizing it is hopeless to tell her not too. But that last line just showed the reader it's really more of the young girl's voice in the back of her head. Telling her heart to be rational and then giving up with the last bit of advice "don't breathe then."
Wonderful story. Amazing imagery. Beautiful as always love.
Previous PageNext PageThank you for your Critique
You are not logged in.