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my little heart of mine. by =Corina90:iconCorina90:

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{"i miss screaming and fighting and kissing in the rain
it’s 2 a.m. and i’m cursing your name
i’m so in love that i acted insane
and that’s the way i loved you
breaking down and coming undone
it’s a roller coaster kinda rush
and i never knew i could feel that much
and that’s the way i loved you"
-taylor swift

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*Solaces Oct 17, 2009, 9:00:25 AM
"i need you to be brave for me. i know you're trembling on wires and clacking against bird-bone ribs, but i need you to set your teeth and stiffen that upper lip. i know it's scary and we aren't getting any medals for courage any time soon, but i think if we both hold hands and close our eyes, we can get through this."

:heart::heart::heart:
:iconillusionaryg:
~IllusionaryG Oct 17, 2009, 9:04:00 AM
this is the embodiment of perfection,
and so are you.
:) beautiful

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Thinking for yourself - that's scarier than any devil image.
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~HamletCell Oct 17, 2009, 9:05:09 AM
this is incredible :heart:
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~pauseplay Oct 17, 2009, 9:06:12 AM
i love how many emotions you can put in one piece and the way you can make the worst kind of pain look beautiful.

this one was mind blowing :heart:.
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~AaniaMillaz Oct 17, 2009, 9:13:40 AM
And as my heart is beating against my ribs faster than it did a second ago, I read the scrambled letters your embroidered heart spread for us in what we could have called another ordinary day of our lives.
Your feelings and the way you express them make my heart dance like lightning.
You may not know me, but I feel safe by telling you I'm in love with this part of you =)
From a fellow writer.
ALM

--
Remember this name.
It'll be famous someday.
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Mood: Love *Solinarii Oct 17, 2009, 9:26:17 AM
absolutely stunning! I can't even think up the words to describe how good this is and do it justice :D

can't wait for more of you work to read! xD
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Mood: Wow! ~ultravioletgloom Oct 17, 2009, 9:28:00 AM
"and don't fret, because if it ends up that he doesn't want you, never forget that i always will. i'll never abandon you or leave you rotting or neglect to tell you that you are beautiful once a day. you will always be loved."

^great !

--
so you think only lil girls play with dolls?
ow baby you're wrong ^^

♥jec
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~cherryblossomrain Oct 17, 2009, 9:37:05 AM
great writing!
(and i love that song. :))

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i reject your reality and substitute my own.

those who do not live a fairytale, write one.

Anderson for President!
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~happymegs81 Oct 17, 2009, 9:40:54 AM
Really cute and short, you did a good job, I can feel the emotion from it, and I think that it's very vivid.

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{My Snowman Melted! Poetry Contest-- [link] Check It Out!

{Take a look at my gallery-- [link]
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~audrayyx Oct 17, 2009, 9:44:53 AM
I think this is the most amazing piece I've ever read. It's just so incredible. ♥

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I know after tonight all your power crumbles in my arms
So don't worry, I'll be fine, when my life ends, I'll leave this scar
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