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this is what i would give to you:

i would give you sea castles during high tide. i would give you an empty beach and a storm rolling in, the sea flagging the danger and the sky rolling in anxiety. the ocean was deepen to sleet gray and i would be waiting in it, the cotton of my dress soaked to my ankles. we could find release in the storm, slipping the silent killers from our bones to wash out with the dregs of the hurricane. the rain would come in with a crack across the sky and we could hold each other through it. our clothes could be sopping wet and flapping in the wind, but we would be rocks. screaming, kissing, unlocking our chests and letting the elements take us.

this is what i would give to you:

i would give you ocean-salted rooms with open french doors and billowing curtains. i would give you an abandoned home and phones off the hook. i would give you peace and i would hold you while you slept. you would be peaceful in your slumber and i would not say a word. i would press my palms to your flesh and i would soak in every disease and fear and agony that slipped like blades through your veins. i would encase them in my stomach and i would hide them behind my lungs. i would clean your heart and cleanse your soul and when you awoke, i would kiss you twice and never tell you why the sun shone brighter.

this is what i would give to you:

i would give you moonlight waltzes over forest fur with thoughts that are naught but musical notes. i would give you body language in italian and kisses in spanish; i would breathe in foreign tongues and would whisper harmonic notes when you dip your arm around the small of my back. the air would be cold, but we would be warm as we met through the fog. we would be obtrusive and intimate and the trees would exhale as they knit around us. we would meet in silence and communicate in sighs. deer would raise their fragile skulls and watch us twine together as we dipped through the night. it would be beautiful, and we would be beautiful, and anything that was not would be trapped outside where it could not touch us.
:iconcorina90:
{"the candles they are burning
and we are always learning
heaven you are watching from above
angel wings wrap me in your love
but we are marching on and on, oh marching
and we grow weary some days
carry me back to where I started from
carry me back to what I've always known
carry me back to my home, take my troubles away
love is on the way, love is on the way"
--susie suh

i would give you forever.
[when the world is cruel, you can forget everything, but never forget this]
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:iconburningrosebud:
this is so beautiful, but I feel like who's telling this thinks that it could never be, I don't know why, it gives me a strange feeling that seats on my stomach, but it could be a happy thing too, I just don't know.
This poem is like salty water on my tongue and feels so good
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:iconvelocity07:
your words are so beautiful it hurts.
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:icongremlinous:
this is really pretty cool, i love some of the components of your style.. skillfully enigmatic, simple and feelable
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:iconjedi53:
I keep coming back to this piece, I love it!!
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:icononceinthelight:
Hi (: I featured you in [link]
if you want; i can take it down.
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:icononceinthelight:
I really really love this :heart:
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:icontifa-amy-lockheart:
~Tifa-Amy-Lockheart Jan 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I want to write a lovely comment about how much this touched me...
But there are no words for how I feel reading this. :heart:

..special.
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:icondarknessinromance:
~DarknessInRomance Jan 13, 2011  Student Writer
This was stunningly beautiful. The imagery took my breath away and the wording is just lovely. I especially love, "i would give you moonlight waltzes over forest fur with thoughts that are naught but musical notes."

You're such an amazing poet.
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:iconpatterninverted:
flows together well... almost sadly poetic.
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:iconstoryofmylife054:
stunningly gorgeous <3
as always (:
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