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simplistic love ballad. by =Corina90:iconCorina90:


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{"give me more loving from the very start
piece me back together when I fall apart
tell me things you never even tell your closest friends
make me feel good when I hurt so bad"
--plain white t's

I will sing you to me. Now. Always.

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:iconrennskye:
Not quite the happily every after flood you were predicting so much as a light shower of happy for now and good with it.
I"m not sure if I should be sad that your pain-writings are gone - because such are always wonderful - or thrilled with the lighter side you now present us with. Either way, I am enjoying riding the ups and downs of your style.
My favorite section was The Dusk.

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~LABB-Club, *MattGasm, ~We-Love-Gaara-club *GLBT-Pride-Club, ~HetaliaFamily
--
"I'm also excellent in bed and disturbingly intelligent." - Dlvvanzor, Creature
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Give me more lovin' than I've ever had,
Make it all better when I'm feelin' sad,
Tell me that I'm special even when I know I'm not,
Make it feel good when I hurt so bad, Barely gettin' mad,
I'm so glad I found you; I love bein' around you.

:love:

very beautiful :heart:
:iconcorina90:
Thank you so much :cuddle:
:iconcorina90:
Mm, trust me, the darker side will come back. I never quite know what is going to come out when I sit down to write. Usually I have a list of sentences that have formed in my head throughout the day and combined with whatever happens to be playing on my shuffle, words flow out. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
:iconrennskye:
I always do.
It's a ride, that's for sure. You're always travling unpredictably when you write. Is your navigation broken or are you letting the road take you where it will?

--
~LABB-Club, *MattGasm, ~We-Love-Gaara-club *GLBT-Pride-Club, ~HetaliaFamily
--
"I'm also excellent in bed and disturbingly intelligent." - Dlvvanzor, Creature
:iconcorina90:
I let the road take me where it so pleases. I usually enjoy the results.
:iconrennskye:
They're pleasant to read, anyway.

--
~LABB-Club, *MattGasm, ~We-Love-Gaara-club *GLBT-Pride-Club, ~HetaliaFamily
--
"I'm also excellent in bed and disturbingly intelligent." - Dlvvanzor, Creature
:iconmiss-deadly-lullaby:
My favourite is dusk.
So sweet~!

It would be really nice to live in this story
:heart: x 10000000

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I just can't help it, I'm so tangled up in you.
:iconcorina90:
Wouldn't it? Just for the day.
:hug: Thank you so much.

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