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sinning tongues still confess. by =Corina90:iconCorina90:


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{"i took a walk in the rain one day
on the wrong side of the tracks
i stood on the rails till i saw that train
just to see how my heart would react
now some people say that you shouldn't tempt fate
and for them I would not disagree
but i never learned nothing from playing it safe
i say fate should not tempt me"
--mary chapin carpenter

lyrics are just important to me
not really having anything to do with this piece:]
this is personal, therapeutic and something i needed to do.
there are so many things i need to say
and so many things i need to hear
but until i get my answers, this will have to do
:heart:


[this is for eleven different people, just so you know.]

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:iconrennskye:
I know it's not really my place to comment on a piece like this - it's to deeply personal - but I think you should know that I want to thank you for letting us read it. Each part sent a new shaft of emotion running through me, and each one was written beautifully. You certainly put feeling into each and every part of this, and I hope it has make you shoulders lighter, because you of all people, deserve to fly.

--
~LABB-Club, *MattGasm, ~We-Love-Gaara-club *GLBT-Pride-Club, ~HetaliaFamily
--
"I'm also excellent in bed and disturbingly intelligent." - Dlvvanzor, Creature
:icond3adp03t:
This is very good. To me you describe the progression of a relationship here, and you do it phenomenaly well.

It is also very sad i might add.
then again alot of life is tears

--
Never wanted to dance with nobody but you
:iconamynnah49:
:']

--
Here’s the truth about the truth: it hurts. So we lie.
:iconhammi89:
beautiful development and conflict.
:iconcorina90:
that's true, but i think for every tear there is equal amounts of laughter
:iconcorina90:
you are one of the nicest people i've ever been lucky enough to meet.
thank you so much.
:icond3adp03t:
yes, yes there is. wouldnt life be unbearable if there werent?

--
Never wanted to dance with nobody but you
:iconalacrityjones:
I like these pieces. Because when they are as well written as this one is, it is so easy to relate to because of all the diversity of our relationships. Which just means that you're doing what you set out to do; make us feel; scrape away the calloused skin and let us put a bandage on. Great jorb, Megan _b

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