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we set the ship on fire. by =Corina90:iconCorina90:

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{"it's the signal that's sent out over the air
at the speed of a thousand unheard prayers
faith in the chemicals
a shot in the dark the size of a particle
it's blood from the neon sign
shine a light away from your insides
make a map of the balance
watching life slip through your hands"
--thursday

full title: we set the ship on fire because we wanted to watch the ocean burn

undecided how i feel about this.
i made myself a deal i wouldn't submit anything today.
and i failed miserably. so oh well.
live to fight another day.

Comments


:iconchloroformboy:
*ChloroformBoy Oct 13, 2009, 6:16:13 PM
asdfasdf so original, lykomgosh

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~Iareyme Oct 13, 2009, 6:17:58 PM
I had to stop half way to click the favorite button because I was scared I was going ot forget to do it. Why? The way you use the dialogue made me forget everything else in the world.

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Icon base from ~candy-pixels
I own the UK in ~bishie-stalker-club

Nikki, It's what's for dinner.
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~aiyemora Oct 13, 2009, 6:19:01 PM
i love the little twist at the end :)

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~it is in the quiet of the mind where the most chords are played, but in the quiet of the heart where songs are made~
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~50calWolf Oct 13, 2009, 6:19:08 PM
such a cool title ;) fits great

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"When life gives you lemons, make orange juice and leave the world wondering how the hell you did it"
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~xXGedweyIgnasia501Xx Oct 13, 2009, 6:21:10 PM
I love the originality, the vision, of this piece. How it's like those conversations we wish we could have with someone but either never really will or are too afraid to try. It's insanity and quirkiness and beauty, all tangled up together.

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"'Never imagine yourself not to be otherwise than what it might appear to others that what you were or might have been was not otherwise than what you had been would have appeared to them to be otherwise.'"
---The Duchess.
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~halfie-redpanda Oct 13, 2009, 6:22:39 PM
hahaha love it. but correction: *sudoku, not sudoko

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wishes are sparkly-- and don't you forget it! :dummy: :star:
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~BookWyrm144 Oct 13, 2009, 6:23:11 PM
OH MY GOODNESS! AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love the definitions and the back and forth and the repetition. Simply spectacular. The theme of it was good too.
:iconkarithelover:
Mood: Love ~karithelover Oct 13, 2009, 6:23:34 PM
omg i love this cause people are always telling me im crazy but never can tell me in what way lol
i think crazy in a good way like most people lol

and i just plain love this one expesscally gypsy-crazy
absoultly beautiful

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i dedicate all my work to my invisable fans:bow:
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~snowwolf-suraku Oct 13, 2009, 6:25:50 PM
wow, can really relate to this one =) awesome work!
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Mood: Adoration ~theblackbride431 Oct 13, 2009, 6:31:06 PM
I love it. You have such a way with words.

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I opened my mouth to taste the rain, and what I got was lemonade...
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